Anyone Reading My Story Please Read this and post!
Okay all I have some bad news, my next chapter will probobly take longer to post then I thought, the good side of that though is the newest chapter is LOOOONG, and is going to take the story in a whole new direction.
However I need your help, I need my story analyzed by you guys and I need your help in telling me how you, the readers view it and the people involved by answering the following questions:
1. How do you view the Icarans as a people?
2. How do you view the main characters as individuals?
3. How do you view the main characters in relation to their society?
4. How would you characterize Icaran society?
5. Do you find any of the characters in the story sympathetic? Do you feel anything for them and have an interest in what happens to them?
6. Do you enjoy the current format and description of battles? Do you want them more/less visceral and bloody?
7. Were there any points in the story thus far that made you feel particularly emotional?- any kind of emotion-.
8. Dou you sympathize with the Icarans as a race and care what happens to them?
9. If this were book would you buy it?
10. Do you find that my writing style has improved since the beginning of the story?
Please feel free to answer those questions however you see fit, I am open to all that you have to say and truely do desire your opinions on the story so far.
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When life gives you lemons take them and squeeze them in life's eye until it gives you the oranges you asked for!
"If men build things to look like our penis such as towers and ships does that mean female achitects represent women having penis envy?"
A line that made me chuckle, I can't remember where I heard it I just know it made me laugh.
"I'm not really a slapper....I mainly punch and gouge."
Tammy Lee my kung fu instructor/sifu's daughter when asked if she ever slapped a boy for saying something nasty to her.
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