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December 18th, 2004, 07:27 PM
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I need some opinions
Tell me what you think of the first draft of a new intro pic for my mod Invasion!
http://www.spaceempires.net/cw/invasionintro.jpg
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December 18th, 2004, 07:40 PM
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Re: I need some opinions
Ooh, pretty.
But the letters need to be more visibly 3d.
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December 18th, 2004, 08:03 PM
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Re: I need some opinions
very nice.
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December 18th, 2004, 08:15 PM
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Re: I need some opinions
Nice, I used that very same planet in a few of my art pictures. Nice to see it used here.
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December 18th, 2004, 09:41 PM
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Re: I need some opinions
Looks great!
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December 18th, 2004, 09:54 PM
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Re: I need some opinions
Heya. Think it looks good in general, but the death star thing over the planet looks rougher than the rest of it, for me. You've got a shaded, angled background, banner and ships that all look good together, and then the sphere just hangs there, front stage, full light, kinda dithery.
My 2 cents. Nice job!
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December 19th, 2004, 04:59 AM
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Re: I need some opinions
Looks good.
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December 19th, 2004, 08:54 AM
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Re: I need some opinions
For a first draft it looks like it's comming along very nicely. But to make sure you keep going in the right direction (towards excellence) I have two thing to place on your 2Do list..
1) Add shadow to the deathstar type starbase. Try to match the shadow angle on the planet.
2) Don't forget to add more ships, and when you think you're done, add a few mor just to make sure you win the battle. 
Oh, and welcome to the fun world of making intro screens.
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