To Suicide Junkie

Raging Deadstar · #1 April 6th, 2003, 06:51 PM

I can't remember exactly if it was you who wrote it but there was an excellent fanfiction done by someone on the SE.ORG Fanfiction archive, about the phong fighting the jraenar who were more technologically advanced than they were? I'm sure it said you were the author so if you did do i have permission to post it? If it wasn't you, does anyone know who wrote it? I want to put it as feature of the month on the fanfiction site i'm making because it was an amazing read, hope you can help

Suicide Junkie · #2 April 6th, 2003, 11:10 PM

Sounds sort of like the one I did, except it was me VS both the Phong and the Jreanar. (not to mention every other race in the universe due to those comm mimicks

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"End of the Line"
http://www.geocities.com/hohoho611ca...l#endoftheline

If that's the one you meant, I do not mind.
I think I'd better give it another proofread, add some more paragraph breaks, etc, and I'll put the results up on the geocities site.

Raging Deadstar · #3 April 6th, 2003, 11:46 PM

Yeah thats the story, the link however won't work (i get to your index page but With the story text i just get a page unavailable thing from geocities. I hope you still have it as it was a great read and hopefully once my fanfiction site is up more people will get the chance to read it! If you need my e-mail its [email protected]

Thanx SJ

Suicide Junkie · #4 April 7th, 2003, 03:00 AM

Righty-o.

The link that was there pointed to spaceempires.org, which is gone now.

You must have caught it just as I was building up a new set of pages. The current link will go to the prologue, with links to the next chapters.
I'm posting them as I proofread and edit them. Adding HTML linebreaks and headers so its legible, too

Especially for the first parts, I'll be cleaning it up a lot. It was less a story than a forum style post early on

PS: I've got a prologue up, as well as "First Blood" and the beginning of "Tour of Duty", both with (IMO) neat historical asides at the top.

Just busy digging through the stupid verb tenses and first/third person switches

[ April 07, 2003, 05:13: Message edited by: Suicide Junkie ]