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After Action Report Thread sticky at the top of the Forum. If you have any comments, suggestions, additions, deletions, please use this thread to do so.
I would also like to say I enjoy reading AAR's very much. Though I do have to say I prefer the storytelling aspect more than the informational (though both have their place and I appreciate the informational AAR's as much as the storytelling ones). And I would enjoy any new submissions or AAR's that people would graciously do for us.
Though one minor point I would ask, is that you edit it in proper grammatical and spelling content for whatever language it is in.