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Old December 18th, 2004, 07:27 PM
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Tell me what you think of the first draft of a new intro pic for my mod Invasion!

http://www.spaceempires.net/cw/invasionintro.jpg
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Old December 18th, 2004, 07:40 PM
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Ooh, pretty.

But the letters need to be more visibly 3d.
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Old December 18th, 2004, 08:03 PM
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very nice.
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Default Re: I need some opinions

Nice, I used that very same planet in a few of my art pictures. Nice to see it used here.
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Looks great!
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Default Re: I need some opinions

Heya. Think it looks good in general, but the death star thing over the planet looks rougher than the rest of it, for me. You've got a shaded, angled background, banner and ships that all look good together, and then the sphere just hangs there, front stage, full light, kinda dithery.

My 2 cents. Nice job!
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Old December 19th, 2004, 08:54 AM
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Default Re: I need some opinions

For a first draft it looks like it's comming along very nicely. But to make sure you keep going in the right direction (towards excellence) I have two thing to place on your 2Do list..

1) Add shadow to the deathstar type starbase. Try to match the shadow angle on the planet.

2) Don't forget to add more ships, and when you think you're done, add a few mor just to make sure you win the battle.

Oh, and welcome to the fun world of making intro screens.

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