[llamabeast]

I think it's nice, but the careful shading you've done with the lighter white at the edge of the silverback has the effect of accentuating the edge and making it look like it has some height to it, as if there is a pile of stuff (icing) on the bear's back. I think if you redo the shading to remove the emphasis on the edge it will look really nice. You certainly seem to have the knack of subtle shading, and have chosen good colours for the back (people often use white rather than grey pixels for something that's meant to be white, which looks horrible).